I like the value range in the drawings on the left, along with their compositions. The scenes on the right are a bit confusing, particularly the one where her arms are raised. I believe all you would need to do is include more values and give more indications as to what is happening in the environment around the characters like you have on the left.
Thank you, it's just that on the right side when I was working on the female with her hands in the air... in tha scene, she was throwing her vail over her head and there was a lot of snow. Sadly the video didn't have a good clarity in that scene so I had to do my best to at least get a sense of what is happening.
I like the value range in the drawings on the left, along with their compositions. The scenes on the right are a bit confusing, particularly the one where her arms are raised. I believe all you would need to do is include more values and give more indications as to what is happening in the environment around the characters like you have on the left.
ReplyDeleteThank you, it's just that on the right side when I was working on the female with her hands in the air... in tha scene, she was throwing her vail over her head and there was a lot of snow. Sadly the video didn't have a good clarity in that scene so I had to do my best to at least get a sense of what is happening.
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