Really like the Text, The boat looks a lil' bit unrefined. Try maybe making it sharper. I like the rendering of shape on the buildings, but i think maybe a yellow color would make it pop more.
Agree with Deonte here Sarah. Don't forget to bounce some of the sun color around on some areas, especially close to the sun. Definitely refine the ship and give it a touch of edge lighting. I'd suggest pulling the type down just a bit too from the top, just to get it away from the edge.
by Sarah D.
Really like the Text, The boat looks a lil' bit unrefined. Try maybe making it sharper. I like the rendering of shape on the buildings, but i think maybe a yellow color would make it pop more.
ReplyDeleteAgree with Deonte here Sarah. Don't forget to bounce some of the sun color around on some areas, especially close to the sun. Definitely refine the ship and give it a touch of edge lighting. I'd suggest pulling the type down just a bit too from the top, just to get it away from the edge.
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