Blog for the Governor's School for the Arts Illustration class.
Saturday, March 24, 2012
Here is how the image is coming along, the reference worked well and I'm glad that it turned out like this... but I still would like some opinions about it before the deadline.
Friggin' Awesome, Really Like this I really don't see anything wrong with it now. Except for inputting the text of Comedy of Errors in it, or where it will be.
Looking much better Courtney. I still think everything seems a bit soft focus and a bit too much like a halo effect around the chain and the figures. I'd suggest darkening the value of the background around the chain, because right now the value of the background behind the figures and the main background are basically the same. Also, the 'red' figure is creating an awkward tangent behind the green figure's shoulder. Overlapping them will solve that. Great work!
Thank you very much! I'll keep trying to make the image in focus, but do you think overlaying a color would help clarify the picture? Because I was working on personal piece, and I thought that it might work the same way. As for the red figure.... I'm not sure how to overlap them.... but I'll keep trying.
Friggin' Awesome, Really Like this I really don't see anything wrong with it now. Except for inputting the text of Comedy of Errors in it, or where it will be.
ReplyDeleteThank you very much! And I was planning on putting the text on the right side of the locket because there is more room to put.
DeleteLooking much better Courtney. I still think everything seems a bit soft focus and a bit too much like a halo effect around the chain and the figures. I'd suggest darkening the value of the background around the chain, because right now the value of the background behind the figures and the main background are basically the same. Also, the 'red' figure is creating an awkward tangent behind the green figure's shoulder. Overlapping them will solve that. Great work!
ReplyDeleteThank you very much! I'll keep trying to make the image in focus, but do you think overlaying a color would help clarify the picture? Because I was working on personal piece, and I thought that it might work the same way. As for the red figure.... I'm not sure how to overlap them.... but I'll keep trying.
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